ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
very good
very very good
sory , I saw that you ought to put this -or like this- sentence in the end
Homeless like me
Without you
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Peace upon you Hitham
well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
what i read is really wonderful
but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes
why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
cheerio
yours Saliha Naidja
ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
:006:Peace upon you Hitham
well i wann greet you then congratulate you for this very nice poem
Really you amazed me ....tyou skillful mastery of languages let obliges me to lift the hat to you ....our dearest poet
what i read is really wonderful
but why so desperate because of a woman .....you emptied tour diction for her beatiful eyes
why homeless .....do women really deserve that huge sacrifice ?
cheerio
yours Saliha Naidja
ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
Hi ! Saliha I hope you have recognized me Iam really pleased to be among you
thanks
ÑÏ: Homeless like the rose
I DEDICATE THIS MODEST POEM TO MISS SALIHA NAIDJA AND ALL HER FRIENDS
:neeww: CONSTANTINEE
TELLE QU'UNE VEUVE DELAISSEE
TELLE QU'UN OISEAU BLESSE
VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
BERCEAU DE BENBADIS
FOYER DES OULAMA JADIS
MA VIEILLE CONSTANTINE
NEDJMA DE KATEB YACINE
O! JE TE PLEURE MA VILLE NATALE
JE PLEURE TON DESTIN FATAL
QU'ONT FAIT DE TOI CES ILLETRES?
CONSTANTINE MA BELLE FLEUR
DEPOTOIR ?ABATTOIR ? OU CIMETIERE?
AUSSI GAIQU'UN ENFANT
QUE S'EST-IL PASSE MAINTENANT?
O! MA CONSTANTINE ! JE TE PLEURE
JE TE PLEURE DU FOND DU COEUR
MES SOUVENIR D'ENFANCE ME HANTENT
DANS TES RUELLES QUI M'ENCHANTENT
DANS LES BRAS DU RHUMEL
COMME TU ETAIS SI BELLE
LE SOLEIL DE TON PRINTEMPS
ME MANQUE DEPUIS LONGTEMPS
TU ES SI PALE ET SI TRISTE
COMME UN CONDAMNE SUR LA LISTE
56./,7JE TE PLEURE MA CONSTANTINE
I MISS MY NATIVE TOWN , MY CHILDHOOD FRIENDS MY PRIMARY SCHOOL.............
I HOPE THAT YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN SALIHA DON'T YOU ?
ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
SORRY I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE 'S' OF SOUVENIRS AND THE'E' OF GAIE
THANKS PLEASE ANSWER
ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
Hi Haythem
Good try dispit the weak forms of it
keep on trying perhaps one day you `ll be a famous poet
Best regards from me
Imad Alyounis
ÑÏ: Homless like the rose
woooow
very good
when I read it , I was enjoying
specially this words:
{ Homeless like the sky
Without… stars
,,,
Homeless like the king
Without… crown
,,,
Homeless like the moon
Without… light }
thanx alot